Essay #1 revised

Temptation is what grabs someone’s attention. It may lead most people to bad things, and someone may not realize that they end up hurting others along the way. Other times, it could be for the right reasons that people are being tempted, but no one may seem to agree. So, 'it's sometimes necessary to do things you know are wrong in order to achieve an important goal.'

  Reaching a goal to be proud of an achievement could bring people down and mistakes will be made in the process, but not what was intentionally wanted. Even though chasing a goal for all the right reasons is difficult, but by having someone to give support, anything is possible. It doesn't mean it is a selfish act; everyone has the same reasons that anyone else that would want to achieve an important goal, would do, in order to be satisfied. Sometimes it is necessary to do the wrong things in order to achieve an important goal because it could be the best or worst decision that was ever made. Even though mistakes will be made, everyone will learn from them because no one is perfect and mistakes shape personalities and strengthen people’s wisdom. Most people learn differently from their mistakes. For instance, being in trouble for the same thing countless times, but it teaches people to try again and never give up no matter how hurtful it may be.

In the beginning, the word 'temptation' was used, it is true; temptation can bring the best or worse out of people, but what influences the decision of people to do so? Usually by following temptation could be for various reasons. For example, trying to fight for something with a passion; such as love for someone or something.
Also, being around the wrong influences could lead others past the main goal to something worse and unexpected. Even though these may influence decisions of many, it is also important to think about the goal and the people that may get hurt along the way, or if the goal is worth fighting for.
Remember that the heart only gives out emotions, but does not think like the mind; the mind depends on knowledge, not feelings. Such as thinking of the consequences first before going into action because trust and respect maybe lost. These are all things to consider when fighting for an important goal. 

Therefore, never give up on goals or dreams, and let no one tell you what to do with your life because life is not always about following other people’s opinions; it could cause people to feel regretful and weak. Discovering a path could lead many possibilities that would have never been thought of; learning from mistakes, even after many trails will help in the present and future. 

Making decisions will help now and later on, and even though the process of following a goal may hurt people; sometimes it is necessary to do things that are wrong to achieve an important goal.